Hello,I tried writing something and was hoping that you might be able to read it and critisize it for me.I'm trying to get the people whose work I've liked alot to help me figure out what to change in how I write and your stories really caught my attention so.I didnt know what to do and it ended up in my scraps so its a painto get to.I hope you can read it and that its not the worst thing you ever [link] and Rammstien RULES!!!!Especially Klein lust.(I think thats the right spelling)

really hot stories you got keep up the good writing

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"Im in the Mistress's harem and it hurts so good" [link]